Friday, April 4, 2014

Why I Do This

Photo Credit: `James Wheeler via Compfight cc

Since you insist
On a plausible explanation why
I do this:

Not for fame,
Or money. Just trying to
Survive the night.

It's NaPoWriMo Day 4 and the challenge today was to write a lune, or a string of lunes. My first version of this poem consisted of just one stanza (the second one), then I decided to add the PAD prompt into the mix, so I ended up with two stanzas. I am not sure whether the poem would work better without the first stanza. What do you think?


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