Thursday, April 5, 2018

The Voice of Things



American Beauty
Photo Credit: Lee Edwin Coursey Flickr via Compfight cc


The Voice of Things


Just a ragged wind,
whining about
the passage of time,

lusting for things as they once were,
its fingers on their skin, its voice
their voice.



GloPoWriMo Day 5 - the procedure is a little involved, but you can find the prompt description here.  Inspired by this photo (All Rights Reserved, so I couldn't embed) and this poem.

2 comments:

  1. I think you did a fantastic job keeping with the prompt and keeping true to the original form of the poem.

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    1. Thank you. This was a difficult one. I am jealous of the original, it is so beautiful.

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